Comments on: Harlequin Presents Writing Competition: Gill Clegg’s Synopis and Editorial Feedback

By: Sally Clements

Sally Clements — Thu, 31 Dec 2009 17:56:34 +0000

Hi Jilly. I’ve written about what I noticed about your first chapter (It was fabulous!) on my blog. Wanted to let you know but couldn’t find a blog/website for you!

By: Christine Carmichael

Christine Carmichael — Thu, 24 Dec 2009 00:24:23 +0000

This is excellent – it shows how the author and editorial staff work together. The author now needs to deliver what the editor (who knows her readers) needs to sell the story and make it a best seller.

Good luck Gill, I know you’ll do it – it’s just the beginning of the journey.

Merry Christmas!

Christine

By: Robyn

Robyn — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 20:25:42 +0000

congratulations on nailing this synopsis, Jilly. I have every faith in you to sustain the emotional tension and vibrant energy of this first chapter throughout the whole story. Everything you write – even if it’s just an email – is fun to read. So proud of you!

Robyn

By: Jackie

Jackie — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 19:39:48 +0000

Fab synopsis, Jilly! Can’t wait to read the rest.

By: mulberry

mulberry — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 19:33:10 +0000

This is going to be a fabulous story- go for it Jilly!

By: Lolo Dee

Lolo Dee — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 15:43:20 +0000

I am looking forward to seeing this story in print as soon as possible!

I really love your characters and I especially enjoy knowing that your Hero has felt the pangs of divorce. Makes him more real to me… The ’cause’ is also close to home and does tug at the heartstrings.

I look forward to Fliss and Ross developing their love!!

Happy Holidays!

Lolo Dee