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		<title>By: Lynn Raye Harris</title>
		<link>http://www.iheartpresents.com/2008/04/editor-sally-williamsons-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-13919</link>
		<dc:creator>Lynn Raye Harris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Apr 2008 13:03:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Whew, just getting back over here after a busy weekend!  

Trish, thank you, and don&#039;t worry about the &#039;e&#039;.  Maybe it&#039;s a US thing, but there are Lynnes and Lynns.  Lynn is also a male name in the South, but not too much used anymore.  Naturally, when I was little, there were two Lynns in my school: me and a boy.  I hated it, though I imagine he did too. :)

Annie, thank you!  I&#039;m having fun writing this story and hope it&#039;ll be available for sale one day (fingers crossed!).

Madeline, once again, thank you so much!  You are LI&#039;s attorney of choice!  And though Rebecca is in the trouble she&#039;s in now, I&#039;m sure it wouldn&#039;t have happened if she&#039;d asked your advice BEFORE proceeding with her plans.  And you&#039;re right, I&#039;ll take HP over Wall Street any day! :)  

(Mulberry is right about your voice shining through, too!)

Redlighting, thank you for the nice comments!  You are right that it was great luck to meet Madeline here.  That&#039;s the thing about romance writers, I&#039;ve realized: we all have so many different skill sets in our daily lives and everyone is willing to help everyone else.  I&#039;ve always been grateful and amazed at the talented women who make up RWA (and its equivalents across the oceans).

I don&#039;t know about the names, but I suspect it has to do with perhaps a writer&#039;s own name being difficult to pronounce or maybe even not all that attractive emblazoned across a book cover.  It can also have to do with privacy.  Maybe Susie Jones is the vicar&#039;s wife -- but Betty Johnson is her alter-ego who is free to write passionate romance.  I think everyone has a different reason. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Whew, just getting back over here after a busy weekend!  </p>
<p>Trish, thank you, and don&#8217;t worry about the &#8216;e&#8217;.  Maybe it&#8217;s a US thing, but there are Lynnes and Lynns.  Lynn is also a male name in the South, but not too much used anymore.  Naturally, when I was little, there were two Lynns in my school: me and a boy.  I hated it, though I imagine he did too. <img src='http://www.iheartpresents.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Annie, thank you!  I&#8217;m having fun writing this story and hope it&#8217;ll be available for sale one day (fingers crossed!).</p>
<p>Madeline, once again, thank you so much!  You are LI&#8217;s attorney of choice!  And though Rebecca is in the trouble she&#8217;s in now, I&#8217;m sure it wouldn&#8217;t have happened if she&#8217;d asked your advice BEFORE proceeding with her plans.  And you&#8217;re right, I&#8217;ll take HP over Wall Street any day! <img src='http://www.iheartpresents.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   </p>
<p>(Mulberry is right about your voice shining through, too!)</p>
<p>Redlighting, thank you for the nice comments!  You are right that it was great luck to meet Madeline here.  That&#8217;s the thing about romance writers, I&#8217;ve realized: we all have so many different skill sets in our daily lives and everyone is willing to help everyone else.  I&#8217;ve always been grateful and amazed at the talented women who make up RWA (and its equivalents across the oceans).</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know about the names, but I suspect it has to do with perhaps a writer&#8217;s own name being difficult to pronounce or maybe even not all that attractive emblazoned across a book cover.  It can also have to do with privacy.  Maybe Susie Jones is the vicar&#8217;s wife &#8212; but Betty Johnson is her alter-ego who is free to write passionate romance.  I think everyone has a different reason. <img src='http://www.iheartpresents.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: redlighting</title>
		<link>http://www.iheartpresents.com/2008/04/editor-sally-williamsons-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-13428</link>
		<dc:creator>redlighting</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Apr 2008 17:42:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congratulations Lynn. I look forward to reading your book. I respect what a lot of work you must do to complete it! Makes me tired just thinking about it. &amp; how lucky to meet Madeline here!
I also enjoyed reading the critique. btw a great synopsis too.
to : Trish Morey- I loved, loved your last book. I am keeping it!
to: Annie West- I also love your books &amp; will get whatever you write next.
To : Abby Green- I have never read yours (I&#039;m a newer reader) &amp; so will get your book this week. I have only read about 3 hps so far this month. I look forward to reading it.
I have had some ?&#039;s that I was curious about that maybe should be on another thread or topic. But I always wondered about when an author uses another name than her own- why do you do that? does that help the book sell? I always thought that books on best seller lists would do better if they had male names except romance.    Also it seems the focus is on faster action books with intrigue. 
Good luck to all of you Mulberry and Susieq or anyone else who is writing! I look forward to reading all the winners books and the rest too. I always buy the new authors books to see how I like them.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations Lynn. I look forward to reading your book. I respect what a lot of work you must do to complete it! Makes me tired just thinking about it. &amp; how lucky to meet Madeline here!<br />
I also enjoyed reading the critique. btw a great synopsis too.<br />
to : Trish Morey- I loved, loved your last book. I am keeping it!<br />
to: Annie West- I also love your books &amp; will get whatever you write next.<br />
To : Abby Green- I have never read yours (I&#8217;m a newer reader) &amp; so will get your book this week. I have only read about 3 hps so far this month. I look forward to reading it.<br />
I have had some ?&#8217;s that I was curious about that maybe should be on another thread or topic. But I always wondered about when an author uses another name than her own- why do you do that? does that help the book sell? I always thought that books on best seller lists would do better if they had male names except romance.    Also it seems the focus is on faster action books with intrigue.<br />
Good luck to all of you Mulberry and Susieq or anyone else who is writing! I look forward to reading all the winners books and the rest too. I always buy the new authors books to see how I like them.</p>
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		<title>By: mulberry</title>
		<link>http://www.iheartpresents.com/2008/04/editor-sally-williamsons-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-13275</link>
		<dc:creator>mulberry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 18:50:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>LOL Madeline- Maybe we will be reading YOUR Presents story one day, you certainly have a great voice coming through in your posts, plus you will get the background right!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>LOL Madeline- Maybe we will be reading YOUR Presents story one day, you certainly have a great voice coming through in your posts, plus you will get the background right!</p>
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		<title>By: Madeline Smyth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Madeline Smyth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 15:33:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yesterday, I had great fun acting as legal counsel to Layton International, which has the distinction of being my first pretend corporate client.  A thought came to mind this morning.  There is a soap opera where all the characters are in desperate need of legal counsel.  I did clerk for the U.S. Attorney years ago . . . perhaps I should get on to the network.  Right!

Now, back to Lynn and The Spanish Magnateâ€™s Revenge, which I assume everyone is eager to hear news about.  

Lynn is now not only armed and dangerous with quick repartee and steamy romance but with corporate high-flying.  I suspect that, when you get your hands on the book, you will find the revised Chapter One even more exciting than the original, if thatâ€™s possible.  Sorry, but canâ€™t tell you more â€“ bound by client confidentiality!

Lynn, if this business of writing doesnâ€™t work out quite the way you want it to (which I canâ€™t imagine happening with your talent, energy, and perseverance), Wall Street will always be there waiting.  No, donâ€™t even consider giving up HP, where passion is guaranteed, for Wall Street, where only ruthlessness is guaranteed.  So, stop reading the blogs and get back to work, Lynn . . . and everyone else, too! 

Madeline</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yesterday, I had great fun acting as legal counsel to Layton International, which has the distinction of being my first pretend corporate client.  A thought came to mind this morning.  There is a soap opera where all the characters are in desperate need of legal counsel.  I did clerk for the U.S. Attorney years ago . . . perhaps I should get on to the network.  Right!</p>
<p>Now, back to Lynn and The Spanish Magnateâ€™s Revenge, which I assume everyone is eager to hear news about.  </p>
<p>Lynn is now not only armed and dangerous with quick repartee and steamy romance but with corporate high-flying.  I suspect that, when you get your hands on the book, you will find the revised Chapter One even more exciting than the original, if thatâ€™s possible.  Sorry, but canâ€™t tell you more â€“ bound by client confidentiality!</p>
<p>Lynn, if this business of writing doesnâ€™t work out quite the way you want it to (which I canâ€™t imagine happening with your talent, energy, and perseverance), Wall Street will always be there waiting.  No, donâ€™t even consider giving up HP, where passion is guaranteed, for Wall Street, where only ruthlessness is guaranteed.  So, stop reading the blogs and get back to work, Lynn . . . and everyone else, too! </p>
<p>Madeline</p>
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		<title>By: Annie West</title>
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		<dc:creator>Annie West</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 09:53:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Daisy, I want to see a photo of these Irish outdoor pyjamas!

Annie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Daisy, I want to see a photo of these Irish outdoor pyjamas!</p>
<p>Annie</p>
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		<title>By: abby green</title>
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		<dc:creator>abby green</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 08:28:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Barbara, there&#039;s a phenomenon here in Dublin where especially around the inner city, it&#039;s quite de riguer for women to wear their pyjama&#039;s ALL  DAY. It&#039;s like a fashion statement, and they have special pj&#039;s that they were out, as opposed to the ones they slept in that night. So if you moved to Dublin you could officially stay in your pj&#039;s all day. Somehow I can&#039;t quite work up the nerve. 
x Abby</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Barbara, there&#8217;s a phenomenon here in Dublin where especially around the inner city, it&#8217;s quite de riguer for women to wear their pyjama&#8217;s ALL  DAY. It&#8217;s like a fashion statement, and they have special pj&#8217;s that they were out, as opposed to the ones they slept in that night. So if you moved to Dublin you could officially stay in your pj&#8217;s all day. Somehow I can&#8217;t quite work up the nerve.<br />
x Abby</p>
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		<title>By: Annie West</title>
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		<dc:creator>Annie West</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 07:30:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lynn, what a great first chapter. I can see why the editors were excited by it. Good on you. Best of luck too on the polishing.

Abby, giggling here at you quaking in your socks!

Madeline, how great that you&#039;re in a position to help Lynn with the financial aspects of her story. It&#039;s terrific to find just the right person to advise on a plot point that&#039;s not familiar. I&#039;ve had several people help me out on things as diverse as diving in the Arabian Gulf, caring for race horses, medical treatments and pithy phrases in another language. I think you&#039;re right that readers want to be swept away by the fantasy. But at the same time it&#039;s good to get the details as accurate as possible.

Looking forward to reading some more of the chosen first chapters,
Annie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lynn, what a great first chapter. I can see why the editors were excited by it. Good on you. Best of luck too on the polishing.</p>
<p>Abby, giggling here at you quaking in your socks!</p>
<p>Madeline, how great that you&#8217;re in a position to help Lynn with the financial aspects of her story. It&#8217;s terrific to find just the right person to advise on a plot point that&#8217;s not familiar. I&#8217;ve had several people help me out on things as diverse as diving in the Arabian Gulf, caring for race horses, medical treatments and pithy phrases in another language. I think you&#8217;re right that readers want to be swept away by the fantasy. But at the same time it&#8217;s good to get the details as accurate as possible.</p>
<p>Looking forward to reading some more of the chosen first chapters,<br />
Annie</p>
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		<title>By: Trish Morey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trish Morey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 02:35:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sorry, that should have been Lynn. Without the &#039;e&#039;.

Where&#039;s the edit button when you need it? Still loved your chapter though:-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sorry, that should have been Lynn. Without the &#8216;e&#8217;.</p>
<p>Where&#8217;s the edit button when you need it? Still loved your chapter though:-)</p>
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		<title>By: Trish Morey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trish Morey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Apr 2008 23:55:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lynne, I love your first chapter, congratulations and no wonder you caught the editors&#039; attention! Fabulous effort. Can&#039;t wait to read more.

And Madeline, what a wonderful and generous offer you made! Here&#039;s to a sprinkle of fairy dust in your life. You deserve it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lynne, I love your first chapter, congratulations and no wonder you caught the editors&#8217; attention! Fabulous effort. Can&#8217;t wait to read more.</p>
<p>And Madeline, what a wonderful and generous offer you made! Here&#8217;s to a sprinkle of fairy dust in your life. You deserve it.</p>
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		<title>By: bburnham</title>
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		<dc:creator>bburnham</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Apr 2008 22:01:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lynn,

    First, let me say congrats on the awesome first chapter and synopsis. You definitely laid out the conflict between the hero and heroine. I will be looking for the final product when it is on the shelves!

    But, I also had to comment on the staying in the pajamas thing: to me it is one of the perks of being a writer. I can only stay in PJs until about 10am though because my oldest son has 1/2 day Kindergarten and I have to take him to the bus stop at 11am. :-(  

    Abby, I have your book in my tbr pile. I hope to get to it soon. Have to finish Helen Brooks&#039; &quot;The Billionaire&#039;s Marriage Mission&quot; first. 

    Great job, again, Lynn. 

Barbara Burnham</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lynn,</p>
<p>    First, let me say congrats on the awesome first chapter and synopsis. You definitely laid out the conflict between the hero and heroine. I will be looking for the final product when it is on the shelves!</p>
<p>    But, I also had to comment on the staying in the pajamas thing: to me it is one of the perks of being a writer. I can only stay in PJs until about 10am though because my oldest son has 1/2 day Kindergarten and I have to take him to the bus stop at 11am. <img src='http://www.iheartpresents.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_sad.gif' alt=':-(' class='wp-smiley' />   </p>
<p>    Abby, I have your book in my tbr pile. I hope to get to it soon. Have to finish Helen Brooks&#8217; &#8220;The Billionaire&#8217;s Marriage Mission&#8221; first. </p>
<p>    Great job, again, Lynn. </p>
<p>Barbara Burnham</p>
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